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Clean up on Smile Five - PG 4

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Story by :iconmrenter:
Art by :iconfarcri:

First Page: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )

PG 3: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
PG 5: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )

Time Spent: 12 hours
Layers: 72

*12/5/13* Thanks for the 1000 views!

PLEASE COMMENT! THIS TOOK A LONG TIME!
So on this page I had a lot of fun making Pinkie look worried and sad. I don't think I like the text I drew though. Anybody have feedback for it? Well anyways, I have no clue why I drew that background for the first panel so don't ask XD

So this ends the first four pages of my comic which set up the premise of the story. Now I can move on and introduce the Mane Six slowly and start the dialogue! And I get to draw Pinkie's past soon!!!

This comic is being drawn for my own experience, to raise awareness for a project :iconmrenter: is hosting to create a fan-made episode of MLP: FiM, and to also give a visual aspect of the story. You can find the update video, and his story that he, I, and many others think is MLP: FiM quality.

STORY: www.fimfiction.net/story/10823…
VIDEO: www.youtube.com/watch?v=RDiJer…

:iconhasbroplz: :iconfyre-flye: My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
This comic is being produced for non-profiting goals.
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It would have been good to see the mirror more clearly before she looks in it to clarify that what we are seeing in panel 5 is her reflection. Maybe sometime in the first three panels.

I like this page, but I think that would help build up tension before we see what has happened to her damage!